Fresher Outlook

Based on today output level. I realise that I waste a lot of time

There are periods between each session where I let distractions take over and end up mentally drained for anything

So I need to work on my focus and not my time management

The 3 VSL I did showed improvement compared to week 1

From the AI’s perspective, I can be considered a junior level copywriter needing to polish my pieces

Where they lack brevity and connection

They make up for in structure and logic flow

I am still missing the emotional, conversational aspect of copy

I find it hard to visual how my copy should be

There lines that just drag

Lingering on the pain a little too long

Talking to someone < Talking with sometime

The copy needs to be a friend relaying info

Not a teacher scolding you

The points of improvement are known

The only forward is to patch the leaks

Tomorrow is 2 Email Sequences, welcome and promotion

I would call it an easy dub and addition to the portfolio

— Sibabalwe